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    Fibi Cala Mari

    TOGAtogaTOGA
    TOGAtogaTOGA


    Posts : 23
    Points : 33
    Join date : 2018-10-28

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    Post by TOGAtogaTOGA Tue Oct 30, 2018 2:10 am

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    Basic Info

    Name: Fibi Cala Mari
    Nickname: Fi Fie Fo Fum, or just Fi
    Epithet: Kraken (inherited), Kraken Junior/Lil Kraken (after true identity is revealed)
    Age: 18
    Gender: Female
    Race: Half Fishman, Half Human
    Affiliation: Pirate
    Bounty: 0
    Achievements: 0
    Profession: Merchant (primary)
    Martial Artist (Secondary)
    Position: To be determined
    Crew: To be determined


    Appearance

    Height: 4'8-6'7 Average height of 5'3 (varies depending on techniques)
    (1.42 - 2 meters)
    Weight: 80 Lb to 300 Lb average weight of 101 Lb (varies depending on techniques)
    (36.28 - 136.07 kilograms)
    Hair: Varies greatly
    Eyes: Usually a goldenrod color with a cross shape.
    Clothing/Accessories: Fibi likes to wear form fitting suits, especially ones that are capable of stretching. Athletic undergarments among other things as well, such as spandex shorts, as she is known to change her body around. Her outerwear consists of long coats, cloaks, capes, masks, and usually whatever she decides to wear, though, she is always identifiable by her signature goggles and helix shell shaped necklace.
    General Appearance: Being half human half squid, Fibi can change her appearance somewhat, a throwback to her fishman lineage. Using chromatophores in her body, she can change the length of her hair, how many tentacles her hair is made up of, and the color along with the texture of her hair. She has a limited amount of control over her body, able to change the pigment of her skin to a fine tan at the most. The underside of her hair is always a white with a few suction cups seen on them.  Around her eyes is a dark skin coloration resembling a bandit's mask. Her eyes tend to change as well, acting as an emote for her, changing her pupils around to indicate her mood should she be exacerbated or exorbitantly enthusiastic. Her teeth are pointed with dull tips. She does not have many curves to speak of with the baggy clothing she wears, but has shown to store ink to make herself seem taller and fuller, though prefers her lithe athletic build.

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    Background

    Personality:

    Hometown: Hermit Shell Island, West Blue
    History:

    Inventory and Abilities

    Combat: Fibi's combat revolves around her unique physiology, utilizing her body's ability to produce ink and using it for projectiles or melee strikes, or subterfuge to keep her foes on their toes. She wields her ink currently with limited control over it after casting it out.
    Weaponry:
    A short spear length paintbrush made with a strong and sturdy wood. Has an iron tip on the other end.:
    Items:

    • Helix Shell necklace
    • Three liter canisters hooked to belt that contain excess ink.

    Beli: 350,000
    SD Earned: 30
    Current SD to SP bracket: 1:1
    Stat Points: 62
    Advancement Points: 0
    SD Remaining: 30
    Stats:

    1. Used for Stats: 57
    2. Used for Fortune: 5


    • Strength: 14
    • Speed: 14
    • Stamina: 14
    • Accuracy: 15
    • Fortune: 14+3 (17)


    Traits: 0/3
    Half-Half:
    Born Leader:
    Technically Adept:

    Profession Traits 0/1
    Rare Find:


    Techniques

    Regular Technique Points: 40
    Used Regular Technique Points: 36
    self reminder:
    Special Technique Points:
    Used Special Technique Points:

    Stippling Tree:

    Gouache Évite (Gouache Parry):

    Graffiti Tree:

    Development History

    Gains/Losses:
    Gains and losses:
    Edit Log:
    Spoiler:
    Tracker:
    Spoiler:


    Last edited by TOGAtogaTOGA on Fri Nov 09, 2018 5:35 pm; edited 6 times in total
    Dunn
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    Let's Be Gods

    Let's Be Gods


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    Join date : 2018-09-01
    Age : 31
    Location : Lvneel Kingdom

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    Post by Dunn Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:24 pm

    1/2 looks good dont get deaded
    Dante
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    十一番隊

    十一番隊


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    Join date : 2018-08-31

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    Post by Dante Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:27 pm

    Can you link the event In your gains and losses with the format: [url=link]name[/url] +30 SD, 300,000 Currency
    Tenken
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    Join date : 2018-10-15
    Age : 33

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    Post by Tenken Fri Nov 02, 2018 11:49 pm

    Can you please also specify that the metal at the end of the paintbrush is iron
    K1ngisback
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    Join date : 2018-10-28

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    Post by K1ngisback Sat Nov 03, 2018 4:39 am

    I see you made the changes these two gentlemen requested, but I need to point out something else as well.

    Your Half-Half trait is a modified fishman trait, which is fine. You have removed the water breathing, and the strength boost which is definitely worth reducing base fishman to 1 trait. Unfortunately, the number of abilities you are trying to acquire with the remaining single trait is too much. For Ink, jelly-like bones, and chromatophores which would be considered a stealth ability, it would be 2 Traits.

    If you were to keep it as either Ink and Jelly-like Bones, or Chromatophores and Jelly-like Bones, it could be a single trait. As it is, it's just a bit too much.

    Because this is a racial trait, and people physically mature over time, you could potentially spend another trait down to road to increase it back to its current state, citing physical growth as the reasoning.

    As far as your history goes, it's mostly fine. I would just tone down the notoriety of the crew she joined, and the 'legendary' title. As a starter character, you begin with a 0 Bounty. If you were to be the stand in for a very famous figure, you would have a bounty. My suggestion is to make it seem like more of a local figure, or, exclude some of it from your history, and actually roleplay it out so that you can receive the bounty after a couple threads.
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    Post by K1ngisback Sat Nov 03, 2018 7:41 pm

    2/2

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