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    Alastor

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    Vector Galindo

    Post by Alastor on Fri Nov 09, 2018 5:22 am

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    Basic Info

    Name: Victor Galindo
    Nickname: The Blacksmith Knight
    Age: 24
    Gender: Male
    Race: Human
    Affiliation: Bounty Hunter
    Threat: 0
    Achievements: N/A
    Profession: Blacksmith [Major] Weapons Specialist [Minor]
    Position: N/A
    Crew: N/A


    Appearance

    Height: 6'4''
    Weight: 196 lbs
    Hair: White, slightly wavey, reaching down to his chin.
    Eyes: pale blue
    Clothing/Accessories: His outfit comprises of a deep blue undershirt with pale blue diamonds on the sleeves, and what appears to be black leather piece with gold trim across his chest and shoulders. His right hand is covered by a elbow length white globe, while his left by a similar, black glove, which exposes most of his hand. He has a red sash tied around his waist, along with a thin, gold belt. He wears a pair of form fitting, black pants, and a pair of knee high black boots with golden trim.
    General Appearance: Victor is a lean, yet well muscled young man, with lightly bronzed skin. He has a rather handsome, kind face, framed with white hair that's cut down to his chin. His face has sharp, yet not too masculine features. His eyes are a bit on the narrow side, but are capable of showing both kindness, and a frightening death glare. His right hand has some scarring on it, due to his training as a blacksmith. He does have some minor scarring on his torso due to his training with the Honour Guard, but ultimately manages to take care of himself pretty well. He has a tattoo of the honour guard's insignia on his back, though he's quick to point out to anyone who sees it that he's not a member of them.

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    Background


    Personality: Victor was always a man of upstanding moral character, with a strong sense of justice. His decision to go into bounty hunting was more to gain the freedom to travel around, while at the same time acting as a hero that the world needs. Even though he gets paid of his work, and he staunchly opposes pirates, he is lenient, and if he sees that someone really is a good person, he'll be merciful to them. That being said, he does put the the innocents first, and he will protect them above all else.

    While he's a fighter and a bounty hunter, he hasn't forgotten his roots as a blacksmith, and will take the opportunity to practice his craft. He'll happily make weapons for others, though will cross the line for making them for those who he know will use them for wicked purposes.

    Socially, he's polite and quite friendly. He tends to be really courteous towards women, often going easy on them in combat. He likes to drink tea, and tends to favour more simple foods, rather than anything really rich.

    Hometown: Lyneel
    History: As a boy, Victor had grown up looking up to two groups on Lyneel. The Honour Guard, those brave soldiers who defended not only the royal family, but the kingdom as well, and the Marine Corp, who protected not just this island, but the rest of the world as well. Born the son of a blacksmith, Victor was raised and taught how to continue the family trade, but he had his set on becoming one of the honour guard, often watching the practice whenever he could. As he got older, and his skills improved, he was taken on as an apprentice blacksmith, helping forge weapons and armour for the Honour Guard, a role he devoted himself to with relish.

    During this time, he developed a friendly rapport with the Honour Guard, and even engaged in some sparring matches with them when they were off duty. It was during these sparring matches that Victor developed an interesting fighting style, utilizing not a sword, but a hammer and chisel. It was this, plus his role as a weaponsmith for the Guard, that he earned the friendly nickname “The Blacksmith Knight.”

    However, as time went on, his perspectives changed. Socializing with the marines made Victor realized that if he joined the honour guard, he would be limited to just Lyneel. His growing sense of justice and honour wouldn’t allow that. At the same time, he just couldn’t fit in with the marines, making joining them not really an option as well. As he pondered this dilemma, one of his friends in the guard proposed something to him. Why not just strike out on your own?

    It all seemed to obvious! Why not go out into the world and dispense justice himself? Be his own boss! A knight of the seas! When he proposed this idea to the guard and his father, they were disappointed in his desire to leave, but were supportive. After all, he was going out in the world to do some good! Given some money, his ‘weapons’ and a small boat, Victor was soon on his way, departing his homeland for the first time to go out and explore the world!

    Inventory and Abilities

    Combat: His combat style is rather precise and technical, but at the same time straight forward. While he tries to avoid killing his target, often aiming to cripple and incapacitate his targets, he wont hesitate to kill if he has to. He's rather surgical in his attacks, often aiming for weak points. He doesn't really stand out in any field, whether it be power or speed, instead relying on precision.
    Weaponry: An iron smith's hammer, 1.5 feet in length from tip to base, with a small head, and an iron chisel, 1 foot in length.
    Items: N/A
    Beli: 50,000
    SD Earned: 0
    Stat Points: 41
    Advancement Points: 0
    SD Remaining: 0/0
    Stats:

    1. Used for Stats: 32
    2. Used for Fortune: 0


    • Strength: 17 (8+9)
    • Speed: 8
    • Stamina: 8
    • Accuracy: 8
    • Fortune: 10


    Traits:
    Fate of the Strong (3 Traits) - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of (# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3) to your strength stat.

    Profession Traits:
    Forge Furnace (1 Trait) – After spending that much time welding weapons and having to put up with the extreme temperatures of the furnace, the character gains immunity to heat-based attacks similar to having an iron body. Any heat-based attack that wouldn’t damage iron won’t harm them.

    Devil Fruit wrote:Devil Fruit Name: N/A
    Devil Fruit Type: N/A
    Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


    Techniques

    Regular Technique Points: 20
    Used Regular Technique Points: 0/20
    Special Technique Points: 0
    Used Special Technique Points: 0/0

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    Last edited by Alastor on Fri Nov 23, 2018 9:15 am; edited 5 times in total
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    Tenken

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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Tenken on Thu Nov 15, 2018 6:02 pm

    Howdy, let's go through it all!


    • Please put an N/A besides Achievements for now rather than leaving it blank.

    • You'll need to add another 3-4 sentences to appearance, mostly detailing the character a bit more in terms of the face. Pictures don't always load after all, so if it ever breaks or doesn't load on a medium then you'll need the description for the backup.

    • You need to actually fill out the Combat section of the profile to give a little run-down on how your character fights.

    • Please give the dimensions (length, width+size of head) for your hammer and the length of your chisel.

    • Your Stat Points should be listed as your actual total not just the starting amount, so in this case it is 41 (32 + 9 from the Fated Traits)

    • Further with this that also makes your starting Fortune 10 (41/4, rounded down)

    • And finally this means your starting Technique Points are 0/20 not /16 since Fortune is 10.


    Once those changes have been made I'll take another look!



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    Isabelle St. James • Weapons Specialist/Chef • No Position • No Crew • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 10 • Beli: 500,000 • Position: Loguetown, East Blue
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    Alastor

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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Alastor on Fri Nov 16, 2018 4:48 am

    Ok, changes made and fixed. Ready for a second look.
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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Dunn on Fri Nov 16, 2018 1:34 pm

    hey just wanted to point out you can only take one fated trait so you would have to consolidate



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    Alastor

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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Alastor on Mon Nov 19, 2018 4:26 am

    Fixed.
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    Tenken

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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Tenken on Mon Nov 19, 2018 3:22 pm

    Your Stat Points should be listed as your actual total not just the starting amount, so in this case it is 41 (32 + 9 from the Fated Traits)



    Adam Kadere • Smith • Smith • No Crew YetBounty: 0 • SD Earned: 30 • Beli: 800,000 • Location: Briss Kingdom, South Blue

    Isabelle St. James • Weapons Specialist/Chef • No Position • No Crew • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 10 • Beli: 500,000 • Position: Loguetown, East Blue
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    Alastor

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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Alastor on Tue Nov 20, 2018 3:58 am

    Sorry, I completely misunderstood what you had said about that. Editted.
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    Acrean

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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Acrean on Thu Nov 22, 2018 1:58 pm

    Only a couple changes still needed as far as I can tell.


    • Your stamina should be 8, not 18.
    • Please update your Regular Technique Points to 20, and your used to 0/20, as Tenken mentioned.



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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Alastor on Fri Nov 23, 2018 9:16 am

    Sorry about that. Fixed.
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    Re: Vector Galindo

    Post by Acrean on Fri Nov 23, 2018 10:36 am

    I think this looks good to me, although you might want to edit the title to say Victor instead of Vector :P.

    Regardless, you've got my 1/2.



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